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Thursday, June 08, 2006

淺淺的紋
淺淺的酒窩
淺淺的是你的笑

深深的夜
深深的思憶
深深的是我的夢

posted by Birgit at 00:04

14 Comments:

  • 妳作嘅?

    By Blogger 梁巔巔, at 8:01 PM  

  • 嗯?

    By Blogger Birgit, at 1:37 PM  

  • 用簡單文字, 結構去寫出詩意, 掂!

    寫得好.

    By Blogger 梁巔巔, at 5:26 PM  

  • 愛河


    尋覓追逐的緣份
    尋得到嗎 追得到嘛

    得到了
    緣有多深份有多深
    千絲萬縷又有幾多可留

    孑然凄凄回首
    緣份只曾在高雄的愛河

    一剎存在過

    化作絲絲憂憂

    http://victorvictor.blogspot.com/2005/08/blog-post_31.html

    http://victorvictor.blogspot.com/2005/09/blog-post_28.html

    多多指教~ ^^

    By Blogger 梁巔巔, at 5:29 PM  

  • 唔記得咗講, 如果認為作得唔好, 或有セ地方可以再好 oD, 要直話直說吖~

    By Blogger 梁巔巔, at 5:39 PM  

  • 祇是抒寫一種感受．

    嗰日心血來潮寫下尼采的說話，其實係喺dou賴生活平淡，難有好文章，遑論詩，嘻，此中有”深”意呢．

    你那兩首可唱．

    By Blogger Birgit, at 10:57 PM  

  • 吓?!

    典唱呀?

    By Blogger 梁巔巔, at 11:10 PM  

  • 是說，感覺像歌詞．

    By Blogger Birgit, at 12:32 AM  

  • :(

    By Blogger 梁巔巔, at 12:55 AM  

  • 逼狹姨姨, 第一次讀到時, 嘩了出來, 驚豔.

    何當共剪西窗燭, 卻話巴山夜雨時. 是這個深意嗎?

    By Blogger sf, at 1:01 AM  

  • LDD: ":("　？

    SF：用巴山夜雨，真令我有點不能自已．

    By Blogger Birgit, at 11:15 AM  

  • "感覺像歌詞"

    即係唔好.....

    By Blogger 梁巔巔, at 12:56 PM  

  • 詩詞詩詞，從不覺得填詞是易事．

    By Blogger Birgit, at 3:51 PM  

  • Heee heeee~

    :)

    By Blogger 梁巔巔, at 3:57 PM  

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